Haiku: Getting Soaked .

By on October 16th, 2010

Getting Soaked.

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Just a green hose-pipe -

But young voices pierce the air

As they jump rainbows

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4 Responses to “Haiku: Getting Soaked .”

  1. T says:
    October 17, 2010 at 10:53 pm

    My heart’s autumn clouds
    Grow warm with the heat of love
    My soul feels rainbows

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    • Jaksie says:
      October 18, 2010 at 7:52 am

      Nice one.
      Thank you for that.
      Hope to hear from you again soon.
      X,
      I would like to add a smiley face at this point in my reply, but I don’t know how, so I am off to try and find out.
      It seems that everybody but me can do it!

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      • Jaksie says:
        October 18, 2010 at 12:30 pm

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        ….many hours later now….and I have finally cracked it. Phew!
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        Oh, all right then you doubters.
        I waited until Big H finally got up….and I asked him how to do it….satisfied?
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        So here we go :) …. :) …. :) …. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :
        ….and even :(
        ….and even ;)
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        Howzat!

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  2. T says:
    October 20, 2010 at 12:35 am

    Very impressive ;)

    Maybe I should leave Haiku to the experts though….

    A bientot..

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